Essay Three:
Tell us an interesting or amusing story about yourself that you haven’t currently shared in your application.
When I was in sixth grade, I was in my school’s orchestra. Every year around summer time, in orchestra we would go on field trips, and in that year, we went to Florida. Of the whole trip, my friends, and I always seems to remember one memory. It was when we all fell together in the middle of Universal Studios in front of what seemed like tons of people. I remember my friends (Katie and Kathy) and I wanting to get on the teacup ride. We got so excited, that the three of us linked arms and took off running. Out of nowhere, from what I remember, Katie tripped on one of her untied laces. Kathy fell also simply because her arm was linked to Katie’s. I let go of Kathy’s arm to avoid falling also, but I ended up tripping over the both of them. The worst part of it all was that the ground was scorching! The heat from the ground caused us pain as well as falling. We were also laughing really hard at the same time.
When we got up, Katie had scratches on her arms, knee, and torn jeans. Kathy had a scratch or two also, but not as bad as Katie’s. I had a very minor scratch, yet I was still in pain. When we looked around, we realized that so many people were looking at us. We were embarrassed, but at the same time, we weren’t. We had a lot of memories, but that is one of the main ones that remain with us. It was a great vacation.
Tell us an interesting or amusing story about yourself that you haven’t currently shared in your application.
When I was in sixth grade, I was in my school’s orchestra. Every year around summer time, in orchestra we would go on field trips, and in that year, we went to Florida. Of the whole trip, my friends, and I always seems to remember one memory. It was when we all fell together in the middle of Universal Studios in front of what seemed like tons of people. I remember my friends (Katie and Kathy) and I wanting to get on the teacup ride. We got so excited, that the three of us linked arms and took off running. Out of nowhere, from what I remember, Katie tripped on one of her untied laces. Kathy fell also simply because her arm was linked to Katie’s. I let go of Kathy’s arm to avoid falling also, but I ended up tripping over the both of them. The worst part of it all was that the ground was scorching! The heat from the ground caused us pain as well as falling. We were also laughing really hard at the same time.
When we got up, Katie had scratches on her arms, knee, and torn jeans. Kathy had a scratch or two also, but not as bad as Katie’s. I had a very minor scratch, yet I was still in pain. When we looked around, we realized that so many people were looking at us. We were embarrassed, but at the same time, we weren’t. We had a lot of memories, but that is one of the main ones that remain with us. It was a great vacation.
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